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wackjonny Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:05 am

Some feed back would be grateful.

http://www.yesconcrete.co.uk/

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shaunthesheep Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:55 am

should be .......

does this web page i made look ok ... WTF

ya got it all wrong , i mean would you understand if a bloke phoned ya up ( ordering some concrete ) and sez

hey shitt us drop tonne one of good that concrete house me round d00d ..

you'd be like

" hey go f*ck yerself , ya piece of shitt " right ????

webb sites excellent though ..your fuckin brilliant mr whackjonnie ...

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shaunthesheep Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:56 am

just ate an whole block of cadburys wholenut too meself ...

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wackjonny Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:58 am

shaunthesheep wrote:should be .......

does this web page i made look ok ...

ya got it all wrong , i mean would you understand if a bloke phoned ya up ( ordering some concrete ) and sez

hey shitt us drop tonne one of good that concrete house me round d00d ..

you'd be like

" hey go f*ck yerself , ya piece of shitt " right ????

webb sites excellent though ..your fuckin brilliant mr whackjonnie ...

Thanks Mark,Don't mind constructive criticism as it cant be improved without it.

BTW Sorry sir,will try harder next time.

:Help

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wackjonny Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:00 pm

Whoo hoo I am a vip member..........?

__::DANCE

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shaunthesheep Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:13 am

read again ...

there was no criticsm , either constructive or not

was just picking you up on your grammer ( the way you laid out your headline on here ) thats all ... nothing wrong with yer webb site ...matter of fact ..if i were gonna build a patio too bury me wife under .. your company would be the 1st id get i touch with ..

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EllieCat Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:02 am

WOW! Impressed! I soooooo wish i had a 'concrete volume calculator' I feel depraved...

Do you make concrete boots btw, I have an ex-husband that needs disposing of LOL!! Russian Roulette

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shaunthesheep Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:27 am

EllieCat wrote:WOW! Impressed! I soooooo wish i had a 'concrete volume calculator' I feel depraved...

Do you make concrete boots btw, I have an ex-husband that needs disposing of LOL!!

depraved ?

or deprived ... or both Smile

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EllieCat Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:27 am

Depraved - *Describing a person or action that is perverted or extremely wrong in a moral sense*

Woops :-) Embarassed

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parapanfan Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:07 am

Layout looks ok but you need to check spelling and syntax thoroughly - there are a few howlers in there.

Barrow mix/Barrow Mix etc - should be consistent throughout.

"At last there's another way than huge mass delivery of ready mix concrete that doesn't mean mixing by hand"

Doesn't make any real sense.

"YES Concrete will deliver premium pre-mixed concrete to your exact specification and requirements where and when you want it"

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shaunthesheep Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:59 am

i wernt gonna mention it ..BUT ...

the bit where it says ~ " order a week before you require it , and i'll put me hand down yer y fronts " sounds a bit dodgy too me ...

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wackjonny Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:27 am

"YES Concrete will deliver premium pre-mixed concrete to your exact specification and requirements where and when you want it"

that sounds much better will add that.

Smile

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shaunthesheep Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:55 am

has that " cemented " our relationship ? Idea

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shaunthesheep Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:56 am

or ..is there " mortar " it then meets the eye Idea

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shaunthesheep Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:00 am

i give up ..im throwing the trowl in ... Idea

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shaunthesheep Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:05 am

i realise now , theres no " foundation " for writing all this bollox Idea

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parapanfan Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:45 am

I think you win on aggregate.

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shaunthesheep Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:49 am

i see your " paving " the way for more gags ..

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parapanfan Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:21 am

I tried to kerb the impulse.

WJ - How about this as a tag-line;

"Need concrete? Call us - you know we'll say YES"

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wackjonny Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:27 am

"Need concrete? Call us - you know we'll say YES"

Mad

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parapanfan Tue Apr 27, 2010 8:21 am

But you're called YES concrete aren't you? Cool

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shaunthesheep Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:45 am

" yes " concrete ...sounds a bit naff i think ...

should really be " sol campbell concrete " ..coz f*ck alls as hard as a blacks head ...specially fuckin sol campbells head .. must weigh the best part of 150kg

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wackjonny Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:35 pm

shaunthesheep wrote:" yes " concrete ...sounds a bit naff i think ...

should really be " sol campbell concrete " ..coz f*ck alls as hard as a blacks head ...specially fuckin sol campbells head .. must weigh the best part of 150kg

lol you and sol whats the deal with sols head.

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wackjonny Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:36 pm

wackjonny wrote:"Need concrete? Call us - you know we'll say YES"

Saying yes to everyone is not always a good idea...some jobs are so tough with difficult access their more trouble than their worth.

FANKS THOUGH.

Dancing

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Hada quick look.........................

52BlackShadow Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:34 am

Hi Mate,
just had a quick look, and the site is really impressive.

Noticed you'd misspelt "Barrowing" on the calculator page!

Good luck, how far can you travel to deliver?

Cheers,
Keith.

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